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Heroes Need a Hero Journey (working title)

by Hans Bluedorn

The thing about time is, you don't understand it. Nobody does. But it flowed out of God and formed all the stars and planets.

And time isn't something that plods along separate from you and me. We are time. You and I and everything we touch. And when we touch the same thing, we are in the same moment.

Somewhere in the vast expanse of spacetime, a dark tunnel stretches out—dissolving into darkness.

In this tunnel sits a young woman, alone. She is a small person with big glasses, but a little nose. Her jet-black hair swings about her cheeks.

She wears a slim space suit. On her back is a backpack, and covering her head is a glass bubble helmet.

Strapped to her chest is a short, thick rifle.

She begins to crawl down the tunnel. Tiny lights above light up in front and shut off behind.

She crawls for a long time.

Eventually, the tunnel ends. Beyond it is the vacuum of space.

A blue-green planet can be seen far away.

She takes a few breaths, fogging her helmet for a moment.

Then, she jumps into the vacuum of space.

She falls toward the planet.

Stars on all sides and the planet in front. Only the sound of breathing.

Minutes pass. The planet looms.

The shape of mountain ranges, glaciers, and rivers.

She is headed for a patchwork of green and tan next to a mountain range.

A rush of air. She is entering the atmosphere. Her backpack hums and pulls on her.

She reaches terminal velocity in the atmosphere.

The ground is approaching fast.

She can see the outline of houses, fences, and trees.

Her parachute deploys. With a jerk and a thud, the canopy opens.

She reaches up and removes her helmet, letting it drop.

She hangs in the quiet air.

No time to look around; the ground is almost here. She pulls on the chute strings and prepares for impact.

She tucks and rolls into a field.

Quickly to her knees, she grabs the chute and pulls it to herself.

She unzips the suit—crawling out of it and leaving it on the ground.

Now, she wears a strip of cloth wrapped around her body many times. It changes colors from red to tan to black to leafy green, back to red. She looks like a camouflaged mummy.

She reaches for her backpack on the ground and removes a small bag with a strap.

Written on the side of the bag is: "wound trauma kit."

She slings this across her shoulders, then picks up her rifle.

Finally, she stands up and looks around for the first time.

The sun sits on the horizon. The bottom of its circle kisses the edge of the world. Is it rising, or is it setting?

All around is alien farmland. Square patches of grain fields alternate with patches of dark jungle.

Above each forest canopy, a few giant trees flower like broccoli.

Groups of grey and red birds, like turkeys, roam about. They wander on the edges of the fields, pecking the grain.

She strides through the field, then climbs over a stone wall into a grassy yard.

Bulging out of the middle of the yard is giant dome covered in grass.

It is an ancient tumulus.

Wedged into the side of the tumulus is a sliding door—closed.

The whole area is overgrown, and the door has not been touched for a long time.

Written on the door are the words:

"WARNING: TIME MOVES INDEPENDENTLY ON THE OTHER SIDE OF THIS DOOR."

She rips away some of the grass and vines blocking the door.

Then, she stands in front of it.

The sun still rests on the horizon. Waiting.

Finally, she pushes her glasses back up her nose, centers her shoulders, steps to the door handle, and pulls.

As the door slides away, she steps back and points her rifle through the opening.

The door opens, and light bursts out.

Just inside, a man lies in a pool of blood. He must have died an instant before. His rifle cast to the side. He wears a camo mummy suit, like hers.

With three strides, she leaps inside the room.

She drops her rifle and collapses next to the dead man.

Then, she cries great sobs. Gasping for breath.

Her wound trauma kit slides off her shoulder. It's useless now.

She sits next to the body for a long time, legs curled to the side, as time rips her away from someone she loved.

The evening light fades to night, and moonlight shines through the door.

Eventually, the present world collects back around her. She wipes her cheeks dry.

She closes the man's eyes with two fingers. His face is content and peaceful—as if he knows of some wonderful conclusion to a story.

She stands up and faces the door she had come through—the door to the outside world.

She hesitates.

Moonlight from outside the tumulus highlights her face.

She is lost and has no place to go. At this moment, she feels her story is over.

But she is still alive.

She steps forward and closes the door.

Now, she stands inside the tumulus with the closed door before her.

Written on the inside of the door are the same words that were written on the outside:

"WARNING: TIME MOVES INDEPENDENTLY ON THE OTHER SIDE OF THIS DOOR."

The night sounds of the jungle are gone. Perfect quiet presses into her ears.

She grasps the dead man's arms and pulls him out of the way of the door.

Then, she picks up both rifles, slinging one over her back and holding the other.

She takes a deep breath and stands straight, centering her shoulders to the closed door.

She grasps the door handle and pulls the door open.

Stepping back, she swings one rifle up and points it at the opening door.

The door slides open.

An orange glow flickers from outside.

Black smoke billows in. Then, a giant head and powerful body staggers in and stands up.

He is seven feet tall. Smoke swirls around him.

The giant looks at her with a blackened face.

She does not hesitate. She fires.

The rifle shudders, and the giant hurtles backward, flattening against the doorframe, then slides to the ground. Very dead.

The rifle whines, recharging.

But.

Stooping down to get through the door, another figure enters.

It stands erect.

A giant, bigger than the last. Nine feet tall. He wears leather armor with the image of a wild boar on the breastplate.

His left hand is a fist of fire.

In his right, a long, thin knife.

He stands in front of the door, dwarfing it.

Her rifle is still charging. She drops it and starts to swing the other rifle around by the sling.

Too late.

A giant hand pushes her off balance, and she hits the ground.

Then the giant foot flattens on her rifle, pinning her left arm under it.

She cries out in pain.

The giant voice: "You're a fast little one."

But she's not out of the fight.

She reaches into a fold of her mummy cloth, pulls out a push dagger, and buries it into the nearest bit of giant.

The weight on the rifle shifts. She pulls her arm out and dives for the first rifle, fully charged.

Her finger closes around the trigger as the barrel swivels to her target.

The knife swings through the air. The rifle shudders in response.

But she does not wait to see the effect. She jumps up, leaps over the dead giant, and runs out the door.

While she had left the door closed for only a few seconds, a lot of time must have passed outside.

All is quiet, but everything has changed. It's still night, but a battle has just ended here.

The grass is burnt. Whips of smoke trail upward where the fire ended.

Parachute canopies lie on the ground—billowing in puffs of breeze.

Bodies also lie about, some giant, some regular-sized, motionless.

Smoke rises.

Drifting away over the horizon are the wrecks of two starships. They consume each other with bright sparks of radiation as they disappear from sight.

Streaks of flame cross the sky.

On the edge of the grassy yard, on the other side of a stone wall, the jungle begins.

She makes a dash for the wall.

She throws her rifle over and tumbles over headfirst, then jumps back up and leaps into the forest.

She stops to listen. Only the sounds of the night in the jungle.

She looks down. Blood pours out of the cloth on her right arm.

She steps into a bit of moonlight and peels back her shoulder wrapping to look.

The knife had caught her where the shoulder meets the neck. She is losing a lot of blood.

She remembers her wound trauma kit, still inside the tumulus.

She peers over the wall at the tumulus.

Light from the open door illuminates the yard.

The light flickers. Someone has moved inside. The larger giant is still alive.

She climbs over the wall, heads back to the door, and peers inside.

Her wound trauma kit lies just past the dead giant.

She points her rifle and steps over the body.

The body of her friend still lies where she had dragged him.

The larger giant is propped against a wall, breathing heavily.

He looks up at her: "I underestimated you."

She doesn't say a word.

She picks up the second rifle and sits on the floor next to the wound trauma kit.

She opens the kit, pulls out a package, and rips it open with her teeth. An odd green bandage falls out—copper wires run all through the fabric, and attached to it is a small battery.

She sucks in her breath and holds it, then peels back her suit and places the bandage. The bandage comes alive and grabs onto the cut—freezing there.

With a gasp, she breathes and pants, leaning against the wall.

The blood pouring out under the bandage ends.

She breathes deep breaths. In and out.

The green bandage is doing its work rapidly. It's healing her body, but requiring a lot of her energy.

She blinks. She forces her eyes back open.

A profound weariness is upon her, now.

Her thoughts drift . . .

A field of stars streaks past. She is falling . . .

She lands.

She stands at the base of a green hill.

It's a bright blue sky all around, but no sun can be seen. The light comes from everywhere.

She is in a memory without time.

She starts to run up the hill—saying out loud: "I'm coming, I'm coming, I'm coming, I'm coming, I'm coming, I'm coming!"

The hill is steep. Her bare feet slip on green grass. She scrambles on all fours.

She reaches the top.

With her hands on her knees, she gasps for breath.

She looks up.

A white cloud comes out of the sky, larger and larger. Moving toward her. It's the shape of a hand, and an arm reaching into infinity.

The hand descends to her and scoops her up. It pulls her off balance, and she falls into the giant palm.

Butterflies flutter in her stomach as she accelerates. She is pulled into the sky.

Faster and faster. The blue sky turns to the dark of night.

Now, she looks around at infinite stars burning with unblinking eyes.

Two spiral galaxies lie naked above. They crash into each other.

Psychedelic arms of stars and nebulae drape about from two galactic cores. One blue, and one red. Each core burns with troubled chaos.

Two of the stars grow larger and larger. They are like flames of fire.

They are two eyes. Now, it's a whole face.

The face glows with joy. It has the biggest and brightest smile as if it knows of some wonderful conclusion to a story.

She rolls over and lies with her head in her hands, and looks into the giant eyes.

The voice of a father speaks to her. It's a voice of fire and water.

He is telling her about things to come. He is telling her of all the amazing things she is going to do in her life. Things we aren't allowed to tell here.

Now the hand is descending toward something in the stars. It's a small, blue-green planet.

The other hand is there now. It picks her up, so gently, with two fingers.

It raises her up to place her perfectly where she belongs.

Now, back in the present reality . . .

Lying in the tumulus, propped against a wall, is a dirty and worn figure.

It's a young woman with big glasses, but a little nose. Her face and hair are streaked with blood and mud. She is wrapped in a bloodstained camo-mummy suit.

Her eyes are closed. She is asleep.

But one hand firmly grips a rifle. Her finger is ready on the trigger.

The rising sun shines through the open door.

The sound of the daytime jungle starts to whine from outside.

On the other side of the tumulus, propped against the wall, is the giant.

The giant stirs. He is still very much alive.

I'm sorry. I write very slowly, but come back later for more of the story.